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Another few weeks and no real writerly ways. There isn’t going to be one in any substantive form this week either, not with everything I have hanging over my head. It’s mostly a drive by with a reminder to self that maybe one day soon, I’ll talk about good books with horrible endings.

I made progress, editing both Splinters and Until the Ice Breaks. I got half way through Machiavelli Moon’s chapter five but no further. At least there has been progress. This was the year of the editing but it’s not really turning out that way, just like all the other years before it.

Speaking of which, would anyone like to read the first chapter or so of a fantasy story named Ties that Bindby myself and [livejournal.com profile] evil_little_dog? We’ve rewritten the first chapter several times, never to our satisfaction and one outside reader had a very negative reaction, one that I personally felt was way out of proportion, but arguably I’m too close to the subject matter. It doesn’t necessarily need an edit but rather more, is this confusion? Does it draw you in? and any other suggestions you might like to make, thanks.

Yearly word count –

115319 / 165000 words. 70% done!

Holiday story (that needs to be done by next week) it has to be between 5-15K (also I would need a very fast beta for this and if you want to see the first half now, ask).-

4363 / 10000 words. 44% done!

Date: 2012-08-19 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marlex.livejournal.com
I haven't been good about helping with critiquing most of what you've been posting lately but I'm not great at taking chunks out of sequence. A first chapter however I could probably help with, at least read and give an opinion.

Date: 2012-08-20 01:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
thanks. I still owe you a story. if you want to pick a new theme/fandom/whatever, I'd gladly do it.

pm me your email or i can pm mine

Date: 2012-08-20 03:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silvrethorn.livejournal.com
I wondered whatever happened to Ties that Bind. It disappeared after the Nanomowhinging critique group petered out and wasn't mentioned again. I'm glad you're reviving it--it was kind of rough-drafty, as I remember, but not half bad.

Date: 2012-08-20 03:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
thank you very much. i should try again with nanomo but the past year just hasn't been right.

I really DO want to try again but every time i start with the critiques, it just fizzles out.

Date: 2012-08-20 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silvrethorn.livejournal.com
It's possible that Ties is one of those stories you've moved beyond. I've had to abandon a couple of stories lately that had ideas and characters I liked, but just didn't "sing" to me anymore because my head wasn't in the same place as when I started them. Resurrecting it is worth a try, though. Maybe there's life in it yet.

Date: 2012-08-20 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cornerofmadness.livejournal.com
it's not really that. I'm finishing another story in that series but I did not do this one alone.

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